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[Maverick]

Thanks, Owa.
Steal my oppurtunity to claim..
Well, here. No comments will be heard.

Forgive me father, for i have sinned.
I have sworn in a house of god, I have held someone higher than the holy father..
"My child, I feel there is something you are not telling me.."
*sigh* It makes me uncomfortable, but..if I must..
      I have lusted after someone who is many years my senior. It pains my heart and my mind, and I know that it is wrong. I have been envious of someone who is superior over me, not by position, but by the way the person is. I envy her intelligence, her looks, her personality, her friends, her friendliness, everything. But I wonder, how can I hate someone who is so hard not to like?
"Dearest child, I sense you are troubled by this. But do not let this get to you."
Father, what do I do about my sins?
...
"Confront them, my child."

[Maverick]

She held his hand, staring off into the night.
Trying not to cry, using all her might.
Her other hand in a fist, she blinked away her tears.
Trying to simply blink away the years.
The years that she had gone without his touch.
She realised then, she had missed it so much.
Sighing a little, she calmly turned her head.
To tell him her secrets that fill her with dread.
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He held her hand, and looked at her face.
Such soft beauty, such wonderful grace.
He could not believe that she was sitting there.
Had it been before, he would not have cared.
But now, it was different. He now loved her so much.
Wanting, longing, more of her touch.
He wanted to tell her what lay in his heart.
That he never ever wanted to see them part.
He turned to her, and felt quite ill.
A feeling some get, before they spill   whats in their heart..this is what I mean there.
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They turned to eachother, and smiled,
Something that which, was often beguiled.
But now, they both thought, what the other would say.
And what impact it would have on the forecoming day.
They both said the most startling words, that one ever could do.
In a soft whisper, they said "I love you"

Please tell me what you think, I worked hard.

[Maverick]

I know this isn't barononline.org, but I wrote this little rhyme for the people on there. I was inspried by "the FFQ rap", by Fallen Angel.

Golbez runs rampant, adding headbands and yellow hair,
While Storm be's beautiful, gets offers, without a care.
Caracal is off bucaneering, the pirate devil
Shelley and Silver, making out in a meadow
Rose is off to France, And Piccolo is being smart.
While Lywellyn Sylvirmyst perfects his forum art.
Satine is being random, KhorneOnTheCob, a big prick.
And Caleb Kinkaid keeps making his funny ass comics.
Munchkin writes her awesome stuff, Renas is defiently banned,
Scribble has the best signature, and I think The Phantom's in Japan.
This forum is ginormous, but I think we do just fine.
I'm glad I stumbled across it, this glorious, Baron Online.

[Maverick]

You all suck.

A question was posed to me late one night, and it was a question that I will never forget.
I answered this question with a long silence, and a few short words.
This question was still unanswered, as I laid down for sleep.
And the real answer rattled my mind until dawn.
Somewhere, hidden beneath all the lies and false reasoning.
Again, this question was posed to me, and again, I thought long and hard.
I thought of experiences, I thought of heartbreaks, and I thought of friends.
I thought of the feeling of tears having dried on my face, after falling the night before, and I thought of all my memories...
But this time, my words were different, longer, and more thought of than the previous answer.
" If I had to choose, between this, and anything else, I think I would turn around, and change everything I have done.
If only I could go back to that moment, I would change everything, at once.
And if only, I was given a second chance, I would most gladly forget,
Because, my friend, this is my one true regret."

A lonely knight stood at the edge of the field, a great castle behind him.
He sighed, as the sun sank behind him, slowly, mocking him.
Not willing to disappear completely until he had gone.
Not looking back, he walked on, until the field turned into a vast wood.
Cold, and alone, he wandered still.
The sun had set at last, giving him the cover he needed to make his great escape.
But it had been to late.
If only the sun was gone a minute before, the knight would of slipped out of the castle unnoticed.
But she saw him.
Standing on the stairs, in a white gown, she stood.
And said, simply. "Fare thee well, Sir Knight. Thou shalt not be forgotten."
The knight wiped a tear with his gloved hand, and continued down the worn path.
He saw her eyes, staring back at him, in the night.
He took a harder look, but it was only his head playing tricks on him.
He thought of her eyes, and saw them in his mind.
She smiled, although her eyes were wet with tears.
"That is not my intention, my lady, to be forgotten."
The knight recalled his own words, spoken only minutes before.
"'Tis my intention to leave, and not return."
The knight had turned his head, and strode away from the girl.
"Blessed are the memories that thou hath given me, and I hope that blessed are the memories I have given thee."
The door had shut quietly behind the knight, and he could not respond.
The knight unsheathed a dagger, and drove it into the nearest tree angrily.
Continuing on the path, he said to no one in particular, " Fare thee well, my lady. I shalt not forget thee."
The dagger glowed blue, quivered, and fell to the ground.
And to this, the knight paid no attention.


Afraid to dream, she turns from her bed.
Afraid to scream, she stares out the window hopefully.
Not knowing what she is waiting for, she waits.
For a realization, perhaps.
A sigh escapes her, as she is reminded yet again.
No words dance on her lips, only tears, bittersweet to the taste.
The only comfort being her stuffed bear, she climbs into bed, yet again.
Preparing for another night of nightmares, that remind her of past times.
As her blanket covers her, she thinks of his voice.
As she rolls over slightly, she thinks of his touch.
As her bear is clutched harder, she cries, closing her eyes, and dreams.
Again.

We sat there, together, beneath the starry skies.
Our hands holding eachothers hands tightly, unaware of what we afraid of losing.
And of all the things to think of, I thought of losing you.
I wondered what I would do if I lost you, if I could not hear your voice whisper secrets to me, if I could not feel you next to me, if I could not see your smile everytime I made you laugh.
I don't know what you thought of that night, I don't know if you thought of me, but I do know one thing.
Being there, with your arms around me, beneath the starry skies,
is something I cannot..describe.
Something, I wish..I will never lose my grasp on.

We sat there that night, alone,
And to me, it was like we were the only people on earth.
The moment was engraved in my mind.
To you, the moment lasted a moment to long.
And you wanted to rid your memory of it as soon as it ended.

I told you that I was cold,
And you asked me not to go
But when I told you that I loved you,
You made me feel quite low.
You asked if you could hold me,
And I hurriedly obligied.
But when you didn't seem to care,
I almost let myself cry.
When we finished our walk that night,
I wanted to hold your hand,
Then you moved yourself away,
And blantly said "I can't"
And when we parted ways that night,
I thought I wanted to die,
But I turned around and headed home,
To make sure you didn't see me cry.
I still dwell on that moment
When everything seemed to be so right
I can still feel your touch,
In the dead of the night.
Wherever you are, whatever you think,
I hope you hear this lore,
I carry memories of you with me,
And I will love you forever more.

Never in a thousand years
I'd think I'd say these words
But I think that you deserve it
Having traveled from a faraway world.
You have always been beside me
and shown you really care.
To hold me from temptation
To whisper in my ear "Beware"
You have always shown me
What is good, and what is bad.
You always make me happy,
and love to see me glad.
Fate has pushed us together
Placed me in your wings,
Has made me so happy,
My heart just wants to sing
I will always love you
Whichever directions we may go
My dearest guardian angel
I will forever love you so.

I couldn't believe the feeling.
I'd never been so high.
Looking up to the heavens above me
All I could see was the midnight sky
You held me very gently,
As we took off into the night
But the darkness, cold, and terror,
Made me grasp you tight.
I shivered from the icy wind
Height being my greatest fear
You held me closer, and tighter
Using one hand to brush away my tears.
Until we flew so high
That we could not see the land
I smiled into your shoulder
Your back, beneath my hands.
Then, with a sudden stop, we stopped.
You looked me in the eye.
You gave me a euphoric kiss
I had never been so high.

[madhatter]

Insulting people is not the way to get them to comment on your work. No one is obligated to comment on anyone else's work. A lot of people here get few or no comments on their work or ideas.

Turning the tables a bit, how often do you make constructive comments? Constructive means not just saying "Good!"

[Maverick]

Um, I was kidding....
You know, joking around..I say it to everyone, when anything happens, to Talon, OwA, my mom, my uncle...everyone...

[madhatter]

Ah, sorry. Sometimes I can't tell.

[Maverick]

Thats quite alright ^^
*pokes madhatter*
Say something about my poetry...I'm getting antsy over here..

[Maverick]

Emo alert!

Blindfolded she sits.
Waiting.
Silently.
In the dark she wonders
Will she ever know the truth?
Still bleeding with hate, she grips her wrists, regretting what she has done.
Her blood pours on the floor, ans she can't do a thing
To stop it.
She can't see, she doesn't know what is around her.
She only knows pain.
She thought it would stop,
She thought it would end.
But he only scolded her and made her suffer
And all at once, the pain subsides...
The blindfold lifting, being cast aside, to the floor.
She unfurls her new wings,
And flies to join him.

[ScienceFair]

Blindfolded she sits.
Waiting.
Silently.
In the dark she wonders
Will she ever know the truth?
Still bleeding with hate, she grips her wrists, regretting what she has done.
Her blood pours on the floor, ans she can't do a thing
To stop it.
She can't see, she doesn't know what is around her.
She only knows pain.
She thought it would stop,
She thought it would end.
But he only scolded her and made her suffer
And all at once, the pain subsides...
The blindfold lifting, being cast aside, to the floor.
She unfurls her new wings,
And flies to join him.

My only problem with this is that it's confusing enough that I don't understand how it went from point A to point B.  Possibly due to shifting view points from what is happening to what seems to happen or something like that shifting without warning and quickly...  Or maybe I just can't understand things anymore.