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Dark Night Sky
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So here we are again,at this place with no love...
another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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ok so here is my other story,i have up to chapter ten all typed up,but i will not post all of them at once. so here is chapter one.
warning:pain,love,and magic(sorry but it is a must for a story made by me has magic)
My life in Hell
By: Queen of Dragons
Chapter one:
Who am I?
This is a story about me and my crappy life I live. My name is Lizen, thats right,Lizen. I am 15 years old and I have a few friends that talk to me,but not often enough. I go to school and talk to my friends but after that we don't talk to eachother. I go on the computer and talk to them but we talk about random things, which is ok because I don't like talking about me to them. So then I get a crush on this guy who I know is to old for me,but I can't tell him afraid that he will reject me for who I am.
So I am just a girl with no hopes,dreams and no good looks. That's who I am,and I bet you wouldn't find a person to disagree with me,and if you do,I would love to meet this person.
Every night I hurt myself and try to get rid of all of my fricken problems by death,but the guy I like comes over to visit me and stops me from my own abuse,thats a friend for you. He cares for me, wants me to live,wants me around,but he won't admit it! Which is ok,no one would, I am a disgrace to myself anyway,so why say that you want a person who doesn't like themself around. I am fine with that,I wouldn't want me around even if I was the last person on earth!
So thats all I have to say about myself,this is my story,so let me tell u more in the next chapter,ok?
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here is chapter one,spelling mistakes and all(if there r any,i am sure u all will tell me my spelling errors). i just wanted to c wut u all thought of my other story.
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Re: another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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June 09, 2006, 12:58:17 AM »
That's like a teaser story... it's more of a prologue... I could make lots of suggestions, but I don't think I will right now... I'm tired... :-(
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Re: another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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Yeah, it does seem like more of a prologue doesn't it. At any rate, I too will wait to see more of this story before I comment. Although, its good so far
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It's not that I'm waiting for more... I'm just too tired to be obnoxious and correcty right now! Which feels like a cop out since I don't even feel tired, but I should be! I just don't want to right now... perhaps tomorrow! I'm gonna get fired! eep... Anyway, thanks for writing for us Queenie.
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So here we are again,at this place with no love...
Re: another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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ok,well thank u all for the comments,here let me put up chapter two for u.
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warning:yelling and plotting......not much of a warning for this chapter,but the one i put on the first chapter was for the rest of the story,not that one chapter.
My life in Hell
Chapter two:
My life 'til now
So when I was in grade school,I was ignored for my 'speacial powers' that I could use for what I wanted. From JK to grade 8 people hated me for my powers and so every so often I would scare some people by making myself float and by writing on the chalkboard from my seat. That was always so much fun to do. But now,no one really likes when that happens,so I try and keep my magic to myself,so no one knows that I have it.
That was back then,but this,this is now,and I am still trying to keep them to myself. It is working,and no one knows about them. I haven't talked to my friends about it yet though. I am always looking like something is wronge at school, because there is always something wronge with me at school. I am always sitting by the guy I like, and I always have that urge to kiss him,but I never can because he has a girlfriend already and that would be wronge of me to kiss him.
I will start this off in the month of April,yes April because that is when my secret is revealed to someone.
So on the 8th of April, I was at home,did a fake wedding for the hell of it. Not much there. On the 9th day,Sunday, I went to church, as usual, still not much to say there. But on the 10th of April, was when my friend Cherety asked me how I was doing at school, here is how it went.
"Hey Lizen!" Cherety called as she walked up the stairs to the second floor of the school. I didn't respond,I was too busy looking off to space and thinking about my problems and the abuse I would do to myself once I got home.
"........" is all I said when she sat beside me,still in my own thoughts.
"LIZEN!!! What are you thinking about that could be more importent then saying something to me!?" Cherety yelled at me,I still didn't say anything to her,I was just sitting there staring off into space and lost in my own thoughts.
"Hey there you two," Mika said as he sat down to my right. He saw that I was staring off into space,he didn't know what I was thinking about,but he could tell that it was nothing good.
"Oh,hey Mika.Lizen is lost in thought again,and she hasn't said a think since I got her,maybe you could help me get her to reality," Cherety said once he sat down,he was the cutest person I have ever seen, his hair was cool,his glasses where cool(his glasses where so cute!),and he himself was cool. When I first met him I thought he was the hottest guy ever,so that is why I think he is hot.
"I see,I will try to get her out of her trance," Mika replied,he then shook me a little bit,which worked because after he did I looked up at him in a daze.
"I see you have finally returned to reality Lizen. Which is good because the tone should go in like what 15 minutes" Cherety joked as she put her arm around me and laughed a bit. I wasn't impressed by this,I would rather be in my own little world then the one I lived in.
"Why did you two do that,I would really rather be left alone,so PLEASE leave me alone!" I yelled as I was about to leave, but then Cherety asked me that dreaded question.
"Lizen wait!" Cherety called after me,ok first she called me then she asked.
"What!!??" I yelled back, I was only a few feet away from them.
"What is wrong? You always seem like there is something wrong in your life,please share it with us,I'm sure we can help you," Cherety asked as I just stood there frozen to the spot.Did I want them to learn about how terrible my life was.
'No way! They just wouldn't understand how it was for me,they would try and make me change my life style.' I thought as I continued to just stand there, I wish I was able to move,but I tried and tried and tried,but my legs didn't want to move. So I just stood there,looking off into space again,I was famous for that.
"Please Lizen,let us help you," Mika pleaded as he got up to get me to sit back down by the wall again.
"I.....I.....I...don't need help with my problems, I can solve them on my own," I stammered as I got up and walked to class,as I first intented to.
"She will never let us help her,so there is no use trying to get her to accept our help," Cherety said as the tone went. Mika didn't want to believe Cherety,but he knew she was right. Or so he thought, he figured he would visit Lizen to help her after school, just to see what was making her life so terrible that she can't even think straight.
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so here is my third chapter,if u want u can tell me all my spelling errors,but i think a friend at school did that for me,and i think i corrected them already. if not,u guys will tell me.
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Music fuels me, u help me see, that i love u more than i love me. so plz dont change me
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Didn't know you chang your life story, into a novel. hell thought you had other types of stories, not sure if you should post them because of ... we you know ... Massive warning for multiple levels ... maby if you re move the parts that said three hours latter and ... you know what i mean.
*looks away in sham*
Rune (in a quit voice): Queen of Dragons please don't hurt me. Please i begg of you.
Queen of Dragons: ...*stares at Rune intently*
Rune: *leaves out of fear*
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Sounds like someone said something they shouldn't.
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Wow I Shure Love These
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Queen of Dragon's, my heart goes out to the pain the person in this story must feel. If only there were a way to save her.
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Yea I Wish i Could Rp in This Story It Moves Me
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here let me put up chapter three,and tell me wut u think of it.
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warning:pain and abuse. if you read the story without reading the warning first i cant help but say, i told u so!
My life in Hell
Chapter three:
My day during & after school
'Why do people try and make me feel like my life is nothing compared to theirs?' I thought in Civics class,yes I know,I'm suppose to pay attention,but I never really have to because my 'Do it Itself' pen does everything for me.
"Lizen,are you ok,you seem to be off in space today.Is there something wrong?" Ms.Dodger asked me near the end of class.Most people don't ask me that question,but I didn't mind her asking me,she is a teacher after all. All teachers ask stupid questions every now and then.
"I'm just thinking about things and stuff,so I'm fine,don't worry about it," I responded when the tone went.Off to history,oh goody,Tommy would be there.Today's history class would be,as always, a nightmare.Tommy would be a smartass again and I would have to resist the urge to kick his ass.
"Good morning Lizen-chan!" Tommy cheered as he walked in the classroom,he always says that when he walks in.I really don't like it but meh.
"That's what it seems to be," I replied in a lazy tone,I was famous for that too,not to pay attention to others but still know what they said.
"Are you alright?" Tommy asked once he sat down,I think he still likes me from when I went out with him, but I know I don't like him.
"Yes I am just damn fine,now will people stop asking me that!" I yelled when the teacher walked in the room.
"Ok Lizen,no one will ask if you are ok,right everyone?" Mr.Fluent asked the class as he shook his head and everyone laughed.I didn't like it,and everyone around me saw that.I was literally steaming,that was totally on accident,that was the first revealation of my magic,but no one cared for it.
"I got the point Mr.Fluent,please don't make fun of me!" I yelled as he turned around to write on the chalkboard.
"Good,then I will stop making fun of you," Mr.Fluent said once he was done writing on the board. I wrote every word down faster then anyone else.
"Hey Lizen,can I borrow a piece of paper?" Gibby asked tapping me on the shoulder.
"No,I have none for your note passing, but if you are writing the note down then yes I have some," I answered kinda rudely.I didn't mean for it to sound rude,but it did.
"Oh,I see. Ok,sorry for asking," Gibby said as he wrote on an old piece of paper he had and passed the note to Jally,and she laughed at his note.
"So true,she is PMSing!" Jally laughed as Gibby laughed with her.
"I am not PMSing you **** TARDS!!" I yelled at them both,that shut them up,but it was a bit to loud and I got sent to the hall for swearing.
"You don't have to swear so loud Lizen,you of all people should know that by now," Mr.Fluent said so calmly I thought he was like me and famous for sounding lazy,but I was wronge because after he said that I passed out on the floor.
"Is she ok Mr.Fluent?" I heard the voice say.It sounded so familiar,and it was.
"Don't worry Mika she will be just fine.She just needs to be less stressed," Mr.Fluent replied as Mika sat me up by the wall near the classroom.
"Ok,why is she stressed?" Mika asked once he got me to sit up.I was awake,but I didn't want them to know yet.
"Oh,it's just that Gibby and Jally have been making fun of her,its not good," Mr.Fluent said as he saw me move a bit.
"What did they say about her?" Mika asked as he held me to make sure that I didn't fall on to the floor.
"They said that she was PMSing because she didn't lend Gibby some paper," Mr.Fluent said as he saw me breathe a bit faster then normal.
"Oh,I see.That's not nice," Mika said as he looked over at me and saw that I was breathing faster then normal.
"I think she is awake now Mika,maybe you should bring her home," Mr.Fluent said as he saw my eyes open a bit.
"Good idea,but what do I tell my teacher?" Mika asked as he helped me to my feet.
"Don't worry about that,I will handle all that,just bring her home so she can rest," Mr.Fluent said as Mika left leading me to his awsome car.
"Thank you Mr.Fluent,"Mika said as he left.
"Are you really going to bring me home?" I asked in gasps,I was still breathing faster then normal.I couldn't help it the guy I liked was touching me!
"Yes,you need rest and I will make sure you get it," Mika responded as I got in his car.He drove me to my house,but he noticed that I was quivering all the way there.
"I....I....I don't want to be here...." I stammered as he parked the car.
"Why not,this is where you live,isn't it?" Mika asked in complete confusion.He never really knew why I acted like I did,but he will soon find out.
"I know this is where I live,but....I don't want to go inside.My mom and dad are probably still home and will be mad at me for coming home," I studdered as he got out of the car.
"Then this is a good time for me to meet your parents," Mika said as he started to walk up to my house.
"NOOO!!!Please don't go to my house,I will go,I don't want them to be rude to you," I said as I got out of the car and walked to my front door.
I knocked on the door and waited for an answer.Then I heard footsteps,that is when I knew my parents were home.The door opened and my mom saw me,and she just exploded.
"What in the world are you doing home!You are suppose to be at school!" she yelled at me as she grabbed my arm and pulled me in the house.
"Mom!!!Please stop,I have a friend with me!" I pleaded as Mika walked up to the door.
"Really?Who is your friend?" she demanded as Mika walked into the house.
"Meet Mika,he drove me home because Mr.Fluent told him to drive me home," I studdered as she saw him and apologized to him for what he saw.
"It is quite alright," Mika said as he now saw why I was always looking like something was wronge.
"Thank you for bringing my daughter home,now you should get back to school before your teachers get mad," mom said to him as I wobbled up the stairs to my room.
"Yes ma'am," Mika said as he left to his car. 'That is why she is always looking off into space at school, she is trying to forget what her parents do to her,or thinking about how to abuse herself,' Mika thought as he drove back to school.
After school Mika came back to my house with my homework,and to see if I was ok.Once he got to the door he heard yelling.He was afraid that my parents were yelling at me,so he knocked lightly on the front door.
"You bitch!You know the rule,no friends over unless you behave!" dad yelled as he threw me against the wall of the living room.
"S....s....s....sorry father,I didn't know that they would be over,really I didn't," I stammered in pain from the throw that I felt.I knew who it was,I just didn't want dad to find out.
"Umm....I would like to give Lizen her homework and help her with it if you don't mind," Mika said as dad opened the door to see who it was.
"Oh,hello there. Sure you can help her,I just don't want to see my girl fail school," dad told him in a nice and happy tone.
"Thank you," Mika said as he walked into the house. He saw that I was bleeding from my arms and my stomach,but I was trying to hide it.
"Now you two can go up to her room,and behave," dad said as I staggered to my room,still in pain from what Mika didn't see.When my dad slashed me for being home and not at school.
"Are you ok?" Mika asked once we were in my room with the door closed and locked with my magic. I locked it so that Mika didn't see my magic.
"Y...y...yeah,I'm o..ok," I stammered still in pain.I knew he could see the blood that was pouring from my body,but I didn't want him to think me a weakling.
"You don't look ok,are you sure you are ok?" Mika asked,still trying to make sure that I was ok.
"Ennnn....*gasps of pain*....ok so I'm not ok,I am bleeding like hell and I have an abusive father,but that is how my life is.Would you care to try and get me out of this situtation?" I said as I tried to get into a standing position,but failed and fell to the floor.
"I could see if my parents wouldn't mind taking you in," Mika told me as he rushed to help me up.He really didn't have my homework, I never have homework,so he lied to get into the house.
"That...that wo...would be nice.....thank you..."I gasped before passing out on my floor.Mika picked me up and put me on my bed,pulled bandages from his backpack(which he brought up with him),and bandaged me.
"Anything for you,Lizen," Mika whispered as he pulled up the covers,sat and watched me sleep.
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this is my third chapter,if there r any spelling errors,dont feel ashamed to tell me,i can take bad news pretty well.
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Kiss me, throw me on the bed and kiss me. make me moan, make me call ur name. spread ur legs out and let me play. Behold the power of my friggen LEMON!!!
Music fuels me, u help me see, that i love u more than i love me. so plz dont change me
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Re: another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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i am going to put up one more chapter before i decide to go to bed so here u all go
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warning:cuteness,hints at violence,and suspence!
My life in Hell
Chapter four:
Tuesday,the next day...what my friends don't know
I found the sight that I woke up to,cute. Mika was laying beside me now,his glasses on my bedside table,his arms around me in a nice embrace. It was a cute sight to see.
"Mmmm...I don't want to be awake," I moaned as I tried to move,but Mika's arms held me in place.
"Lizen!Time to wake up!Don't make me send your father up there!" mom yelled up to me.
"I'm up mom!But Mika isn't awake yet!" I called down to mom.She would never believe me,but it is true.
"You mean he's still here?" mom called back up to me.
"Yes.I suppose he stayed to watch me during the night," I called down to her. I hope she believes me.
"Ok.I guess that's acceptable, since your father did draw blood from you this time," mom called up as she went to work.
"What does she mean 'this time'? Has this happened before?" Mika mumbled as he woke up.He startled me because I thought he was still asleep.
"Yes.This happens to me every time I don't behave.But this is the worst of all the times.Father said he would torture me every chance he gets," I said quite fast.I'm not suppose to tell anyone what father does to me.
"That is terrible!" Mika said sitting up.He was shocked that I didn't run away from this,that I just accepted this abuse and said nothing to anyone.
"I know that it is bad,but I don't mind,I get use to it after awhile.But it still hurts like a bitch," I said while I gathered my school stuff.
"You really should tell someone about this, let them help you," Mika suggested while he got his glasses and grabbed his backpack.
"Oh hell no,no one should hear this.Father would kill me if I tell anyone,you shouldn't even know this," I said scared of what father might do to me if he found out that Mika knows what he does to me.
"I see.We need to get to school,and fast or we'll be late," Mika urged as he and I left my house and hurried to his car and rushed to school.
Once we got to school I went to the wall,the one we always sit at,and gazed out to space as always.Mika went to his locker to put away his coat and car keys.Then he came back to the wall and sat beside me.
"So,you gazing off to space again,that must be fun," Mika said as he put his arm around me after he sat down.
"Yep,real fun," I replied in a lazy tone,again.I just wanted to hug him right there and then,but didn't in fear of embarassment.
"Hey Lizen!Morning Mika!" Cherety said while she came over and sat down with us.
"Hey..." I said in the same lazy tone I always use.
"Oh My Gosh!She spoke without yelling at me!" Cherety said,she was only joking like she always does,but this time she was really shocked.
"Hey Cherety," Mika laughed at her reaction to when I said hey to her.
"Who are you and what did you do with Lizen?" Cherety continued to joke.
"She's fine,it's just that,she is still happy that I slept over at her house," Mika said,trying to avoid saying more about the day before.He knew it would hurt me a lot for others to know.
"Awww...that's so cute!Does your girlfriend know that you did this?" Cherety asked.She was the kinda person who loved to see others together.
"Hey everyone!" cheered Flare.She was in my hospitality class,we have been friends for,like,since we lived in the Co-op.
"Hey Flare!" I called,I always yell that when I see her.I haven't seen her for 1 year though because she wasn't in any of my classes last year.
"So how are you Lizen?Did you tell Mika that you...." Flare started,she has a habit to ask if you told someone something yet.
"No!Please don't you tell him!" I cut her off.I didn't want her to tell Mika that I love him.
"Tell me what?" Mika asked with caution.He knew that Flare,Cherety, and I were perverted,so he knew better to ask with caution.
"Nothing!" I said quickly my eyes shifting in all directions.I will tell him,but later.
"You'll tell me later,right?" Mika asked as the tone went.
"Umm........yeah later!" I called rushing off to class.
Civics wasn't much fun,although I did get to write my story Wings & Tails because my 'Do it Itself' pen did all my work.Then there was history,and was it ever hell!
"Morning Lizen-chan,how are you?" Tommy cheered,like he always does.
"Morning,I'm good," I responded in my usual lazy tone.
"That's good," Tommy said once he sat in his seat.
"Morning Lizen!" Gibby and Jally teased together.They were both very annoying.
"Yo," I responded in a lazy tone and waved to them.
"Whoa!" Mr.Fluent said acting oh so surpirsed.
"Don't,please don't piss me off,I'm not in the mood," I said,writing my story as my pen was ready to write any work in the class.
"She speaks without swears!" Mr.Fluent teased as he went to the board to write the note.Everyone laughed at what he said,but not me,I've had enough of him teasing me.
"I can speak without swearing sir," I responded quite firmly.I wanted to be sure he got that.
"Really?Well I'm not use to you not swearing," Mr.Fluent said,still teasing me.What he,and the rest of the class,don't know is that one I have a short temper and two that I have magic,and is very dangerous when the two combine.When anger is released by magic,it equals....destruction.
"Well then,I guess you don't listen to me well enough SIR!" I growled,I went up in flames and became part wolf.I had wolf ears,claws,fangs,eyes,and tail.I was really pissed.
"*Screams of fear!*" everyone in the classroom yelled as they all ran out of the room.
I bounded out of the classroom and sat at the wall,waiting for my friends so they know about my magic.They didn't know because I never told them,but now,I want them to know.The tone went,and I waited for my best friends to get there.I changed back to normal.
"Hey Lizen," Mika said while he sat down beside me,as he usually does.
"......" is all I said to him.I had to wait for all of them to be there to tell them this secret.
"Hey you two!" Cherety,Tommy,and Flare said as they all sat down.
"Hey," Mika responded,he looked at me.I had my head in my arms which were around my legs which were curled up to my chest.
"I have to tell all of you something," I said,still in my position.
'It's now or never Lizen.They NEED to know,' I thought as I looked up at all of them.
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here is my latest chapter for now,i will update later......today i guess.
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I can't remember the last time a story actually made me want to get up and hunt the jackass down. Your writing is filled with emotion and feeling. My heart breaks for the poor tortured Lizen. Pleas write more.
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So here we are again,at this place with no love...
Re: another story by me!this one is just as good as the other one i am writing.
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just for u all,i am going to put up chapter five.
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warning: romance,pain,blood,and well teasing. thats all i think.
My life in Hell
Chapter five:
The scare
"So what do you want to tell us Lizen?You look scared to say what you want to," Cherety stated looking at me.She knew when I was scared to say something and when I am willing to say something.
"I....I....I have magic,please don't be mad at me for not telling you earlier,"I replied,still in my huddled up position.I put my head in my arms.
'They're your friends,they'll understand.I hope,'I thought as I felt all of their eyes watching me.
"Why would we be mad at you?" Flare asked.She thought that it was a cool thing to have a friend with awesome powers.
"Because I never told you that I've got them.I was born with my powers," I explained,I looked up at them once again.
'Don't they know that magic can be very dangerous to others,including them.If i get mad,who can say that I won't attack them first?' I thought with tear welling in my eyes.
"We don't mind.As long as you think about us as friends when you get mad,we don't mind," Mika said.He put his arm around me to comfort me.
"Thank you....all of you.I'm glad to have friends like you," I said happy that they undersatnd.I started to cry with joy,they didn't mind that I had magic powers.
"Your welcome," Cherety said while Mika patted me on the back.They didn't mind it,they like me for me.Which is always nice to keep in mind.
"So do you want me to visit you today Lizen?" Mika asked with his arm around me.I was incredibly happy.I will get him to visit,then tell him that I love him,then...then get rejected because he still has his girlfriend.
"Sure you can visit,my parents hopefully won't mind," I said scutting over to him.His arm wrapped around me,his hand on my waist.
"Cool,then we can just chill in you room," Mika said holding me close.
'I think Lizen loves me,that's ok,I love her too.But then there is Rachel,she won't like it if I date Lizen without telling her.This is a bit of a problem,' Mika thought as he held me for all of lunch.
The tone went and we all went to our classes,it was day 1,I had my manufactoring technology class.Once I got to class Fred was talking to the other guys about what happened in history.I sat down and everyone stared at me.I really didn't like that feeling.
"Hey wolf girl," Fred said as I got out my books for class.
"Watch it,she might burst into flames!"teased Shikno,those two are best of friends.
"Please don't piss me off.I'm accually in a good mood damn it,so leave me the hell alone,ok?" I said as I continued to write my story Wings & Tails.
"Ok everyone,to the shop!" Mr.Flume said as everyone got their goggles on and went to the shop.
"Yes sir," everyone said once they were in the shop.
"Lizen,time to get to the shop," ordered Mr.Flume.He wanted to see what I've done so far.
"Oh,but I am,"I said in my usual lazy tone and pointed to the shop,where the real me was.
"How are you in two places at once?" asked Mr.Flume,he was really confused at the moment.I was never in two places at once,at least,not in this class.
"Let me ask you something,when have you ever seen me write in pen?" I asked,holding up my pen to prove my point.
"Never,wait,then this is..." Mr.Flume started as he was still trying to understand all of this information.
"A halogram generated by the pen to confuse people," the halogram me told him as I worked on my paperpunch in the shop.
"I see," Mr.Flume said,giving up on trying to understand this.
Mr.Flume helped me,the one in the shop,with my project.I was done 20 minutes before the end of class.So I made the halogram disappear when I put away my pen.Then I started to read a book,after putting away my binders away in my backpack.Then Shikno decided to try and piss me off.
"So wolfy,what are you reading?Is it about how to burst into flames and attack people?" Shikno said laughing.He wanted to see how mad he could get me.
"**** off,Shikno.I want to be left alone," I responded in my lazy tone,as always.He decided to try again.
"So you have magic.That seems dangerous,considering how dangerous you are even without magic," Shikno said,still trying to piss me off.He wanted to see my magic.
"Oh just **** off.Can't I read in damn ****in peace," I said a bit angry.I just wanted to be left alone.
"But I want to know what you are reading and if you have magic,"Shikno said with sarcasim.He just loved to piss people off.He reminded me of Gibby.
"The book is about dragons and fire and death,and I will never tell you about my life," I responded in a lazy tone.I just wanted to leave school,not go home though,but leave school.
"I see,well see you in hospitality," Shikno said near the end of class.Joyful,I forgot he was in hospitality.
"I hate you,"I said as the tone went and I left to hospitality.I just wanted to see Flare,tell her to help me calm down from my last class.
Once in hospitality I sat down in my seat and took out my pen.Flare came into the class.She walked over and we talked.She helped me calm down.Which is good because if I was mad,I could have attacked people out of anger.
In class we made chicken stuff,not much.Mr.Lossa told us to partner up and do our chicken project.So Flare and I were partners and finished our projects in one day.
After school I decided to walk home,but before I left the school Mika stopped me.
"Lizen,do you want a ride home?" Mika asked as he put his arm on my shoulder.
"Umm...sure,why not.Then you can stay and visit for awhile," I said as we walked to his car.I never really liked walking home.
"You probably want to go in your house first,right?" Mika asked while he drove me home.
"Uh...yeah,I'll go in first,just so my partents know that I stayed at school all day," I responded.He parked in the usual spot,and I got out of the car and walked to the door.
Once I got in the house Mika walked up to the porch, when he heard yelling.He wondered why,I was good all day,then he remembered what I told him and waited at the door.He heard screams from me and yells from my dad.He also heard thuds,he assumed that it was me being thrown against the wall or something.Then he heard me stammer something to dad,and he heard footsteps towards the door.
"Hello young man,here to see my little girl?" dad said as he let Mika in the house.I was on my knees bleeding and crying in pain.
"Yes,you don't mind do you?" Mika asked,going towards me to help me up.
"Of course not,you can be here anytime to see her," dad said as we walked up to my room.I locked my door and then collasped on the floor.
"Lizen!Oh no," Mika cried as he rushed over to me,put me on the bed and bandaged me,once again.He now knew that every time he comes to visit that he would have to bandage me up first.
After he waited an hour,hoping that I would be ok,I woke up,moaning in pain.
"Errr,this hurts,trying to sit up," I said trying to sit up.I was right,it did hurt.My entire body was slashed up this time.
"You alright?" Mika asked while he sat down beside me.He didn't want me to pass out this time.
"Honestly,no.I'm in a HELL of a lot of pain.Dad loves doing this to me because I'm the only one in my family with magic,and the only one who won't die when he tortures me," I said drifting off.I almost passed out,but Mika squeezed my hand to get me to stay awake.
"He killed the rest of your family?!" Mika cried,not too loud though.He didn't want to get my dad up here.
"Yes,he did.I - I - I couldn't stop him,he knows what hurts us immortals,he used it to stop me.I can't do anything to stop him,I'm not suppose to tell anyone either.When father finds out I told..." I cut myself off.I was crying at this point,head in my hands.
"Don't worry,I'll try and get you out of here," Mika said holding me to calm me down.
"Thank you Mika,I hope you can help me soon," I said all huddled up in his embrace.I love him,he loves me,but neither of us knows yet.
"I will see what I can do," Mika told me as he held me close.
"I want to tell you something," I said looking up at him.'Time for him to know.'
"What is it?" Mika asked.'She might tell me something surprising,I better Brace myself for this news.'
"I love you Mika,I want to be with you forever,I want you in my life," I said holding him tighter.'And now he will tell me that he is flattered,but reject me.'
"Lizen,I feel the same way about you,the only problem I have is my girlfriend.I have to dump her first before we can be together," Mika said.I was happy that he flet the same way.
"Well,that is so cool," I said kissing him on the cheek.
"I know.I'll try to 'kill two birds with one stone' today ok?" Mika said kissing me on the cheek.
"Thank you," I said hugging him gently.I knew what he meant by that.
"Cool,well I've got to go home to ask and to dump my girlfriend,then I will come right back,ok?" Mika said as he let go of me and went to leave.
"Ok,see you soon," I said as I hugged him before he left.
"Yeah,see you soon," Mika said as he left my house and went to go home.
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well,here it is,my fifth chapter.i hope u all like it,my friends say that chapter nine and ten are thee most detailed chapters i have,i am getting up to those ones quickly,so u all can find out for urselves,soon enough.swy bout the swearing,i forgot about that.
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Yay! I think that's the only feeling I can describe for this chapter.
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