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[Dark Night Sky]

yes, yes, i know. 'Too many stories, stop writing!' well i can't and i had this idea for a few weeks now, so i had to type it up. so here is another story writen by urs truely!
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warning: needles, random expliantions, diologue a plenty, death, and that should be all...i hope.

The Forsaken
By: Dark Night Sky
Chapter 1: They are assembled

   “We now have 4 teenagers here, let us test our solutions.”
   “Yes sir.”
   “Let us start with the one on the right.”
   “Ok.”
   I woke up to these voices, not knowing where I was or who they were. I opened my eyes and looked around. I saw a dark room and a small barred window. I saw my friends chained to beds, I looked at my own hands, and saw chains on them to. I saw Jem, Flen, and Jame all around me.
   Jem, she has been my best friend ever since grade nine. We love to draw and write, then read what each other wrote. She taught me how to draw people.
   Flen, he has been my friend for 2 years. I met him one year after Jem. He loves to watch anime, but he is gay. It’s obvious. But he helps me out when I need it.
   Jame, he and I were friends for 2 years. This year our churches had this Snow Camp, like they do every year, and we both got together. We are a couple now, we have been for a month and 2 weeks now.
   I saw needles, and looked scared. I had no idea what they were planning on doing. I saw them put a needle in Jem’s neck, arm and side. Then they saw me.
   “Looks like she’s awake,” the tall scientist said, as they stood by me.
   “Fredda, put her back to sleep while I work on this young man,” the shorter scientist said going over to Jame, who was beside me.
   “Yes sir,” the tall one said as he put the gas mask on my face, ”Don’t worry, it will all be over soon.”
   I fell asleep soon after the mask was put on me. The only thing I could think about was, what are they going to do to us all?
   I woke up a bit sooner than the scientist’s expected. I was awake while they put in my fourth needle.
   “I thought you put her to sleep!”
   “I did!”
   “Fine, we’re on the last needle anyway, hand me the fifth one over there.”
   “Here you go.”
   “Thank you,” the shorter one said, injecting it in the same spot as the fourth one.
   “Wha…what are you…?” I started when I noticed a dragon tail, then realized it was mine.
   “You are now the ultimate dragon girl.”
   “You will die for doing this to us!” I growled, my eyes changed into dragon eyes.
   “Good luck, you’re chained to the bed.”
   My tail whipped up and broke my chains, Jem’s chains, Flen’s chains, and Jame’s chains.
   “Uhh…shit.”
   My hands went up, I got invisible strings and tied up the shorter scientist, pulled on my strings, and tore him to bits. My tail wrapped up the taller scientist and suffocated him to death.
   I got up off my bed, went and woke up the others.
   “Get up guys,” I said as I nudged everyone.
   Jem had telepathy, gender switch, and the ability to jump really high, really far. Flen had lightning fast speed, ability to control electricity, and to control stormy weather. Jame had black angel wings, a long wolf tail and all the magic in the world including healing. As for me, I had dragon wings, a dragon tail, all the magic in the world times 3, ( meaning I got 3 needles with the same solution) but no healing, and I had wolf habits and instincts.
   “I’m up,” Jame mumbled, sitting up. He opened his eyes and almost fell off the bed.
   “Yeah, I know. I’m part dragon, but look at yourself,” I said, my tail nudging Flen.
   “Wow, you two look cool,” Jem said, she didn’t even move her lips.
   “Now that was cool,” I said, tail still nudging Flen.
   “That was,” Jame responded, amazed that I was part dragon.
   “Ow, poking hurts, poking hurt,” Flen said and rolled over, but he fell off the bed, and hit the floor hard.
   “Ok then, let’s go before someone finds us all,” I said and ran out of the room. Everyone else ran out as well, Flen out the fastest.
   We ran out of the room, down a lot of twisty turning halls, through some doors, and finally out the warehouse front doors.
   “Now where?” Flen asked, now standing by me.
   “Well, we should go and test what we all can do first,” I said flying to the back of the warehouse.
   We all went to the back of the warehouse to see what we could do.
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i hope u all enjoy my story while u read, and i decided to put it in colour, i hope u all don't mind red. if no one wants it in red i can change it to something else, it doesn't matter. the colour will not effest the storyline at all. i just hope everyone likes it.

[Dark Night Sky]

so here is my second chapter. so i hope someone reads it and comments.
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warning: power showing off-ness, and that's all i can think of.

The Forsaken
By: Dark Night Sky
Chapter 2: Our New Powers

   “So who wants to test themselves first?” I asked, landing on a pile of boxes.
   “I will!” Flen exclaimed, excited to go first.
   So we all stood of to the side and he went to the clearing. He ran around in a circle, going really fast. He stopped, then he raised his hands and thought of something that made him really mad, lightning shot out of his fingers. He smiled and then with a snap of his fingers he created a storm.
   “Cool,” all of us said, applauding.
   “Who’s next?” I asked, stopping the storm by snapping my fingers.
   “I will,” Jem said floating to the clearing, and stood. Flen moved to sit and watch her.
   She spoke to all of us by her mind, she became a guy then a girl again, then she jumped to the roof of the warehouse and then down to the box beside me.
   “Cool,” all of us said, applauding.
   “You can go next, Dracil,” Jame said, gently pushing me to the clearing.
   “Ok then,” I said, flying off to the clearing.
   I stood in the clearing, not knowing where to start, so I flew up and created all types of storms. I stopped them all with a snap of my fingers. I became part dragon part human. Then I became a dragon, then a unicorn, then a lot of other people and creatures. I became myself and used all my magic one way or another.
   “Awesome!” everyone else exclaimed, applauding.
   “It’s all you now Jame,” I teased, gently pushing him to the clearing.
   “Fine,” Jame said with a smirk.
   Jame flew down and transformed into a wolf with black angel wings, then a hawk with a wolf tail. Then he went back to normal and used all his magic one way or another. He flew back and sat on a box beside me.
   “So now what?” Flen asked, looking confused at what we do next.
   “I guess we go home,” I said, now flying in the air.
   “Ok see you later,” we all said to each other and waved. Then we all left to go home.

A few hours after we all left…
   
   “Sooo…” I started as we all sat on an empty lot in the middle of nowhere, near a road.
   “Never thought we would be here so soon,” Jem thought spoke. (Talking without using her mouth.)
   “Why are we all here, with stuff from our homes? Did we all get kicked out?” Flen asked. We all did have our things from our homes where we use to live.
   “Pretty much, yeah,” I responded, sitting on my suitcase.
   “So now what?” Jame asked, sitting beside me on the ground.
   “I don’t know. Dracil, what do we do now?” Jem asked, looking worried.
   “Hey, I’m not a boss or a leader, why ask me?” I said, crossing my arms.
   “Vote, who wants Dracil to be our leader?” Flen asked. Three hands shot up, ”All oppose?” No hands.
   “You don’t oppose, or agree? Wow,” Jame said with a smile.
   “Why would I oppose?” I said, not minding my new role.
   “Ok, now that you’re our new leader, what do we do?” Jem asked.
   “We make our new home, using our own abilities to create it,” I said getting up.
   “We will?” Flen asked, confused about my decision.
   “Yes, we will. Why, don’t you want to?” I asked with a glare, my eyes now dragon eyes.
   “No, it’s not that I don’t want to, it’s more like, where are we going to?” Flen answered, scared of my dragon glare.
   “We’re going to make our home here,” I said with a happy look on my features now.
   “Cool. We all get to live with each other forever,” Jame said, standing as well.
   “Well then, let’s get started on our new home!” Jem exclaimed, standing up with Flen.

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and there u have it, my second chapter. someone comment, i'm getting worried that no one likes it! or even reads it! someone plz prove me wronge.

[themaster129]

very nice dracil  thanks for putting me in ur story lyl

[Dark Night Sky]

np Jame, always happy to help out.

i love u more!

*kisses*

[Dark Night Sky]

ok here is the third chapter, enjoy!
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warning: house building, explainations of house being built, weird french and non-french people, eating in resturant, and a couple like scene.

The Forsaken
By: Dark Night Sky
Chapter 3: Our New Home

   I created the materials and we all came up with the blueprint for our new home. And off we went to building it.
   We built our living room, then kitchen, then the bathroom, then our pool room, then our stairs to our second floor. Our second floor had all of our bedrooms, a bathroom, and a balcony for my room and Jem’s room. Then our awesomeness roof.
   We all chose the paint for the outside of the house. Then we all painted our bedrooms. Then we chose another room to paint and furniturize. Then we painted that room the colour we chose for it. Then we chose and bought/made the furniture for that room. Once we were done all that, we took pictures of our new home.
   “And here it is,” I said cheerfully.
   “And it took us only a day and a half to complete it,” Jame said, sitting on the couch I made.  I never liked to buy furniture, so everyone else went and bought furniture for the room they chose. I got to paint and furniturize the living room, so yeays me!
   “Oh well, as long as we have a place to live, the time it took doesn’t matter,” I said sitting down beside him.
   “This is so cool!” Flen exclaimed, sitting in the black chair with the flame design.
   “I feel good. This is a big accomplishment for me,” Jem said sitting in the red chair with a black dragon design.
   “Who wants to go out for dinner?” I asked, getting up to go out to dinner.
   “I do!” everyone else cheered. We all got up and left our home. Before we left completely, I used my magic to make an invisa-shield around our home so no one else sees it.
   We got to the restaurant and waited to be seated.
   “Good evening,” Franswa, our incredibly not French host, greeted.
   “Hi,” we all said.
   “Welcome to ‘Monswa Chasur’. Please come right this way. We have a table for four over here,” Franswa said, directing us to our table.
   “This place is so cool,” Jem thought spoke to us.
   “Indeed, “ I responded.
   We were then seated and handed our menus.
   “Sherika will be your waitress tonight, so please, if you need anything just ask her,” Franswa told us then  left.
   “ He looks like he is 28,” Flen whispered to us.
   “He does,” I responded, looking back at Franswa.
   “Ello, I’m Sherika. I’m your waitress for zis evening,” Sherika introduced.
   “Hi,” we all responded.
   “So fwhat fwill zit be?”
   “I would like a vanilla milkshake.”
   “I would like a chocolate milkshake.”
   “Me too.”
   “Can I get a strawberry one?”
   “Oui.”
   “Then yeah, I would like a strawberry one.”
   “Oui, you can look over zee menu while I get your drinks.”
   “Thank you,” we all called.
   “So what do we all want?” I asked, staring at the menu.
   “Spaghetti,” everyone else chimed.
   “Ok, now we wait for her to come back.”
   So we all sat there and talked while we waited for Sherika to come back with our drinks.
   “I’m back, zere are your drinks,” Sherika said, placing our drinks down.
   “Thank you,” we all said.
   “Are you all ready to order?”
   “We all would like spaghetti.”
   “Oui, I’ll be right back.”
   We got our food awhile later, then we ate, paid then left saying our thank you’s to everyone that served us.
   Once we got to our home we sat in the living room and watched T.V. At around 10 pm we all went to our rooms.
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   “Ugh,” I said as I flopped down on my bed, “Being leader is hard.”
   I liked to talk to myself, because the best conversation is with someone who knows what it’s like.
   *knock, knock*
   “Hello?” I called from my bed, to lazy to get up.
   “Can I come in?” Jame asked.
   “Sure,” I said, looking at my clock. ‘I should change soon.’
   “”I was wondering if I…”
   “Could sleep with me, yeah I know.”
   “So can I?”
   “Sure, I still have to change, but meh.”
   “Oh.” Jame blushed.
   “You don’t mind do you?”
   “O-of course not.”
   “Cool,” I said and walked to my closet to get my pj’s and started to change.
   ‘Wow, she is incredibly hot. I know we’ve been dating for a month and 3 weeks now. But still, damn.’ Jame thought, watching me. Forgetting that I knew he was.
   “You can stop watching me anytime now, you’re starting to make me blush,” I said putting on my pj pants.
   “Sorry,” Jame apologized as I climbed into my bed, now fully changed. Jame slipped into my bed as well.
   Jem and Flen were asleep once they laid on their own beds.

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i am currnetly working on the fourth chapter, but i am going to try to get it up as soon as i possibly can. i love this story and i am sure a lot of others do as well. i can't wait to hear ur comments!

[themaster129]

Very nice i miss you so much just one question were did we get the money for all of this construction and the dinner why didn't me and you just use magic

well lyl bye *kisses*

[Dark Night Sky]

ok, just so u know, they used magic to make their home, they used magic to create money to buy the furniture, and they used magic to create money for their dinner. i love u too jamesy! but yeah, they did use magic.
*kisses*

[Ryosuke Takahashi]

I can't wait till I read more of this.   PLease don't stop posting this story...

[Dark Night Sky]

i wont stop posting on this story, so no worry.

[Ryosuke Takahashi]

 kk  thats good

[Dark Night Sky]

i know.

[Ryosuke Takahashi]

 

[Dark Night Sky]

nice.

[Ryosuke Takahashi]

mind if we return to the story?
... when will the next chapter go up?

[Dark Night Sky]

when i am done writing and typing it out. i hope u dont mind the wait.